VENT: CRITIQUE, "Silent Music"

 "Silent Music"

VENT-Can You Relate?

with (Empress) QueenVersatile 

My own professional written critique  about my unique writing style.

                     By: (Empress) QueenVersatile 

I write silent music.  Technically,  it's silent lyrics because it doesn't have any written sheet notes.  However,  as you read my written lyrics, you read to the vibration of your own heart beat and to your own energetic frequency.  You create your own music as you read my written lyrics to your own rhythm that you only possess and emit.  No two people will read my lyrics alike or anything I write.  My written lyrics are written;  to entice, to listen to your own internal heart beat, instead, listening to external created beats made by others' heart beats.

The best way to learn thyself is to get in tune with thyself.  Tune in to your own heart beat daily and listen to what it has to say and offer.

VENT-Can You Relate? Meditate!

(Empress) QueenVersatile 

with LOVE, JOY, and PEACE (Shalom)!!!

VENT: Song Lyrics, "From Better to Worst"-Writing Songs, Another Form to Venting

Written By:  Queen Versatile

Orig. Written On:  October 23, 2019, Wednesday

"From Better to Worst"

(Intro)

Instrumental 4-8 Bars

(Hook/Chorus)

From better to worst,

She gave up for the worst.

Affected the ones who meant the most;

 only wanted less

and rejected the best.

Tried to give her good solid advice.

But she never heeded my advice, so she disregarded it twice!

Tried to use me as a life line

while she wallowed in dust:  from dawn to dusk!

(Verse 1)

She was up for the best and now she's down for the worst

I took her under my wings reenacting the crucifixion

Her choices of men was not good

Mostly judgmental cause they looked hood

Now the consequences of all her bad decisions 

Has accumulated-piled up like the Tower of Babel
 She continues to complain, babbling, & false accusing

Too deceptive can't decipher her between humans, animals, & jungle snakes

You wouldn't guess she use to be civilized

Holding her own house down; helping everybody around
Now she's rabit;  been out in them woods for too long

Her body ran down; a lot of miles traveled;  down a slippery slope, there she go

3 beautiful little daughters;  Subjected to their mommy's foolish antics

They suffer in silence where nobody knows from a distance

Expected publicly to perform highly as a minority while being held at a lower standard

While getting their butts whipped & backs punched in for their mother's anger she holds within!

(Hook/Chorus)

From better to worst,

She gave up for the worst.

Affected the ones who meant the most;

 only wanted less

and rejected the best. 

Tried to give her good solid advice.

But she never heeded my advice so she disregarded it twice!

Tried to use me as a life line

while she wallowed in dust:  from dawn to dusk!

(Verse 2)

She'll pay a hundred a week for a daily weed habit fee

Versus paying for her daughter's $7 school field trip

That's a trip! 

You do the math

She tried to stay attached to me, Queen V

And use me as a life line

But I'm not a dummy

I can read in between the lines;  Far from a slow leak
Airtight, I never leak

So of course her little antics didn't work when she tried to play me.
Yeah, she did use her little daughters to manipulate my feelings
But what she didn't realize, there's nothing new under the sun & her games I've seen before
I seen that play; (echo-"Replay")

She never wanted to hear solid advice

But when she gets jammed in a pickle

And I tell her "Hell No! I don't have your back."

She wants to act bitter and put a knife to my neck; not literal, not Queen Versatile

But it's cool though 

Distance yourself Lil Sis

Cause at the end of the day it won't affect me anyways

Now you took your bad attitude out on me but it should've been them dudes who turned they backs on you while you were up & clueless.

FYI-Now you down & my name is Cat;  I don't have nothing to do with that!

(Hook/Chorus)

From better to worst,

She gave up for the worst.

Affected the ones who meant the most;

only wanted less

and rejected the best. 

Tried to give her good solid advice.

But she never heeded my advice so she disregarded it twice!

Tried to use me as a life line

while she wallowed in dust:  from dawn to dusk!

(Verse 3)

My heart go out to them 3 little daughters

That endures the day-to-day hell

And then made to promise their mother

They won't tell

If I didn't already have an A.M. on my record

I would send they mom straight back to hell 

And set them little babies free
So they can enjoy Heaven like little girls suppose to be

Consequently, releasing them from they mother's homemade jail cells

I have to remember-that's the human in me

I'm not the Messiah-that's the spirit in me

I can't save everybody

So I'mma humble myself and pray a little higher to the one above the I AM that I AM, thee Almighty Yah!

She's just reaping the consequences

The total sum of her life's bad decisions

But she can't handle the cup alone that she drinks from

So she pour it out on her kids, publicly and privately,
Especially in the home environment where she can operate freely
She went from better to worst!

(Outro)

Father please hear them little girls' cries

They're bright and beautiful don't let them succumb to demise
I pray that they will never travel to the dark side

No lie, they mother resembles Chucky's bride

She was carried off by her own freewill

And didn't give a care about my Heavenly Father's will

So ease the punishment...
And let her 3 little girls live;  forfeit the inevitable punishment

(Additional Outro)

You gave her what she really wanted

 The Pure Dust!

Ashes to Ashes And-Dust to Dust!

She's like the little pet snake she plays wit day-to-day!
Mothers come out the darkness and set a good example for your earthly sons and daughters!

VENT-Can You Relate?

Written By/Author:  Queen Versatile

Orig. Written On:  October 23, 2019, Wednesday

VENT: Article, Tear Down-"Rebuild"

VENT-Can You Relate?

with Queen Versatile

"REBUILD"

(Getting Straight to the Point👈)

Example:

People get married prematurely and haven't reached ten pentacles in their own spiritual & natural lives.  When this mishap happens, you have to tear down and rebuild.

People look to other people to fill their cups when the other people are usually completely empty or empty in specific areas in their own being and lives.

We need to look to the water giver that is the life giver.  He waters and nurture every area of our being so that we can bear and produce fruit in life, good fruit/good karma.  

Why look to insufficient flawed mankind for your needs to be met when they can't meet their own, in many life cases? (Ahhh, rhetorical statement!)

Why go to the store when the product has a defect or flaws?  The store didn't create the product.  But instead, go straight to the manufacturer who has the guide to all the product parts and can provide an adequate solution.

You will always feel frustrated, angry, hungry, thirsty, mad, sad, depressed, oppressed, and trapped-when you keep looking to the store to fix a manufacturer's defect.  The same applies to all relationships, including relationship with self-the primary focus point.

This toxic behavior leads to constant destructive non-constructive behavior.  Encouraging the tearing down and not building up.  However, some tearing down is needed at some points in areas of lives when the structure wasn't built correctly and/or defects and insufficiencies has been discovered, found, and revealed in the foundation it was built upon.

When mankind are thirsty and hungry, they have a tendency to seek water and food from anywhere in an act of desperation and (false) fulfillment.

We as human beings need to stop for a minute, step back, breathe, meditate, and pray so we can obtain:  the full details to the bigger picture;  and be able to accept and process the truth correctly and healthy for what it is truly.

When we live on truth, we live our true reality.  Being awaken to what is truth depends on your life's journey and what the Most High-Creator, has blueprinted for your personalized life- customized just for you!

You can only take notes from my personal life journey.  As a result, you can't walk it out nor live it out because it's my own customized life journey created just for me;  to live out my purpose that I was sent here for.  Self evaluate as needed, tear down, and rebuild. And mostly, don't forget to quiet down, meditate, and pray.

VENT-Can You Relate? Meditate!!!

with Queen Versatile

LOVE, JOY, and PEACE (SHALOM)!!!

VENT: Song Lyrics, "Just Accept"-Writing Songs, Another Form to Venting

Written By:  Queen Versatile

Orig. Written On:  October 23, 2019, Wednesday

"Just Accept"

(Intro)

Instrumental 4-8 Bars

(Hook/Chorus)

I never wanted to be a rapper 

But I was born this way

I never wanted to be a lyricist

But I was born in dismay

 I just accept my demise

And rap anyways

It's a crucial conflict; I'm not complaining

It's a prison that I'm living in
It's not a barn that I'm rapping in

Time is too short-I Just accept my coming end!

(Verse 1)

I'm delighting in Yahuah

Not even in my kids

If so I wouldn't be worthy to be called his

I'm bout to take the kingdom back

Push all these bubble gum rappers aside

Because they're whack

Put a MS(dot) on my name

In the front and not the back

Remember I'm Queen Versatile
I was born chosen

With a crown upon my head

But I'm not exempt nor misled
 That I got to pay the high price that's upon my head

(Hook/Chorus)

I never wanted to be a rapper 

But I was born this way

I never wanted to be a lyricist

But I was born in dismay

  I just accept my demise

And rap anyways

It's a crucial conflict; I'm not complaining

It's a prison that I'm living in
It's not a barn that I'm rapping in

Time is too short-I Just accept my coming end!

(Verse 2)

Making music off the cell phone

Whoever thought It would be me

I was born eating blessings and curses off my plate
Too early to be spoon fed so I regurgitated

I'm full grown & have double energy
They never should've killed Doc Woo, my bro from the hood, Greenview

Now he lives inside of me
I have double energy

There's no stopping me;  now & never later

I'm unstoppable Like the cricket man
I spit lightning and absorb every body's energy

It's a struggle to cool myself down

I can never be destroyed;  only transformed into kinetic energy so just accept it 

(Hook/Chorus)

I never wanted to be a rapper 

But I was born this way

I never wanted to be a lyricist

But I was born in dismay

I just accept my demise

And rap anyways

It's a crucial conflict; I'm not complaining

It's a prison that I'm living in
It's not a barn that I'm rapping in

Time is too short-I Just accept my coming end!

(Verse 3)

I'm learning how to tunnel all this energy

Filter & redistribute it correctly

Frugally when it's falling on listening ears

Especially when it's falling on ears that can't hear

I have to ask, "Why mommy & daddy

Did you make me this way"?

I apologize

Let me correct my rhetorical statement

Yahuah, why did you create me this way?

Why question cause I trust your judgments anyways

So I accept the judgment inside of me

As a result, I hear from my spirit, then I ask, Heavenly Father please forgive me! I just accept!

(Outro)

Don't put me into a box

I'm not a gospel rapper

I'm not a worldly rapper

I don't fit in any crock pot

Never a one-pot meal
Just accept Queen Versatile
 The real versatile meal;  Never slow cooked just over easy hot flames
So elevate your minds & let the lyrics minister

Truth is the only relevant issue;  Man's opinions are irrelevant

I'm just MS(dot) Versatile

Who write fire lyrics!!! (JUST ACCEPT!!!)

VENT-Can You Relate?

Written By/Author:  Queen Versatile

Orig. Written On:  October 23, 2019, Wednesday

VENT: Song Lyrics, "Dollars Circulate"-Writing Songs, Another Form to Venting

Written By:  Queen Versatile
Orig. Written On:  December 19, 2019, Thursday

"Dollars Circulate"

(Note:  Lyrics by Queen Versatile to the beat "Dollars Circulate")

(Intro)
Instrumental 4-8 Bars


(Hook/Chorus)
Money got people heads spinning round
There's no debate that cash flow circulates
Producing more slaves in legalized slavery
The one's on the top will eventually get dropped

I'm watching the dollars circulate...
To less independence & more politics
Money continue to circulate while we debate
To the lowest denominator;  mirror mirror on the wall
 ...VENT-Can You Relate?


(Verse 1)
Money come and money go
Make yo' enemies jealous with cash flow
Let the crumbs fall where they may
Let the foes lay where they stay

Keep the money coming like Niagara Falls
Never let the love of money take you
It's cold out here when the lack of-have you
Hot heat leads to robberies

Greed is a superficial pit; don't get caught in
Don't try to snatch when I'm coming through;  Or else death will befall you
As a consequence, you meet yo ancestors in the eternally ever after
You seeing all red, no stops just pass goes,
Only green lights that circulates like the almighty dollar that correlates to cash flow!


(Hook/Chorus)
Money got people heads spinning round
There's no debate that cash flow circulates
Producing more slaves in legalized slavery
The one's on the top will eventually get dropped

I'm watching the dollars circulate...
To less independence & more politics
Money continue to circulate while we debate
To the lowest denominator;  mirror mirror on the wall
 ...VENT-Can You Relate?


Note:  My apologies for only one verse.  I got bored with the beat and just stopped writing in mid air.  Sort of kind of like relationships-just stop in mid air and decide you don't want to do this anymore. That's me, Queen Versatile, VENT-Can You Relate?.  You never know what you're going to get-unpredictable!😲



VENT-Can You Relate?

Written By/Author:  Queen Versatile
Orig. Written On:  December 19, 2019, Thursday

VENT: Article, Getting Back to the Black Family-"Standard"

"Standard"

VENT-Can You Relate?

with Queen Versatile

Purpose: 

 Bringing Black(Hebrew) Families Awareness

(The Church is not family in its own right.)

However, family is family and we must get back to our roots and real structure of what family means and to build stable & solid family structures properly.

Now let's properly vent...

😏Men want the thrill and when they get old they want the real.

Women & men who don't take the task seriously to raising their children will always cause problems, issues, and high cost for someone else later in life;  especially for women operating in relationships with defected, non-raised, non-properly raised, and mama's boys-not to exclude daddy's neglects & rejects.

Times are different now and black men are not forced to go into tents physically to lay with as many women as they can breed babies, laying with a woman and as soon as he's done then go to the next and lay with the next woman all while producing(neglected&rejected) babies/children/live human beings in the process.

To keep repeating this cycle of history that's non-productive to the black(Hebrew) family while no one is standing over or behind you with a leather whip all for the results to produce and reproduce forced labor for economic growth for other cultures is absurd in these days and times than ever before with the many opportunities to come into real truth to become spiritual, mental, and financial free.  There is no physical bondage but only spiritual and mental.(Free the spirit, then you free the mind and body, consequently.)  And with these two types of bondage are weak links in the family chain structure.They create a conducive environment for physical and financial bondage. And black men wander why they can't get ahead (without cheating their way to so called prosperity).  It's not the white man that's keeping them down, but the entire disobedience of the entire race of Hebrew people, so called black people and African Americans, towards their creator-Yahuah.Look how most men treat the queens and life giving mothers of this culture of people and heritage.  A mother is demeaned and attack for her role as a mother to the extent of her title being dumb down to being a mere baby mama.  Women in general are looked upon and treated as a piece of meat or some type of trophy to show case and flaunt around just for show and for the ego of an egotistical and uninformed man.  Mind you, you do have volunteer women who don't know their true self-worth and have sold their self-worth for mere pennies on a dollar. And usually they don't have a clue as to how to think, behave and operate like a honorable lady or queen due to 9 out of 10 not having a queen in their daily lives to model and display before them what a lady or queen should be. And most insufficient and sufficient men will prey on and take advantage of these weak link factors and bring the woman, child, and race even further down in status and condition than they were initially.

All these issues in the black community results and equates to poverty, hardships-financially, physical burdens,  spiritually, relational, mental, emotional, and generational.  There is an unnatural imbalance of family structure mainly on the man's behalf due to his lack of understanding the real role and position of first being a "real" man. Then next, establishing what it means to be a "real" daddy and role model.  Lastly, establishing what it means to actually be a "real" husband.

Some of these black guys long for these positions, titles, and roles but have not the first clue how to obtain nor operate in these above listed positions, titles, and roles.  Instead, they end up resulting to mistreating women, their own flesh and blood children and trampling over and dogging out real queens and wives who are generously supportive, loving, caring, compassionate, hard working, intelligent, wise, knowledgeable, and have their fronts, sides, and backs.  It's hard for them to appreciate women of these traits and magnitude because it naturally raises the standard bar for their own character;  some men can meet up and most can't due to being insufficiently equipped, not prepared, and/ or just making a conscious decision to be out right egotistical and not caring about the value of others' self-worth and generous contributions to their lives.  

Instead of treating the real women with the real worth that they deserve, they treat all women alike, like thots, hoes, a piece of meat, property, and some object they can use and abuse at their pleasures and convenience. Then they produce kids/children in the process who also later grow up and learn these ways of these despicable men and as a result of not understanding real family structure, they instead, duplicate the ways, behaviors, and thought processes of the defected individuals (including defected life giving mothers who don't have an idea nor clue what a real woman is and should behave and operate).  Now we have generational mayhem on our hands that now is duplicated and passed down generational that others on the outside and inside of the mayhem has to now encounter and deal with as an unfortunate consequence.

Today, black men in particularly are still enslaved and in bondage.  They are being used mentally and physically to enact forced slavery on the women and children of this race of people.  Every time a black male produce a seed, impregnate a black woman to leave her alone to support a pregnancy, to raise, and provide for a child/children by herself or with the assistance of other minor children she has already had prior that was also neglected and rejected by the black male-that black male is enacting forced slavery and producing a legacy and heritage of poverty upon an entire race of people whether it be financial, spiritual, physical, emotional, relational, or mental.  Let the truth be told, if one area of well-being is off centered and affected, as a result, it will cause all other areas of well-being to be off centered and imbalanced.  

Due to the economic and social positions(including stigmas) that a black woman lack positively and possess negatively, it makes it 10 times harder for her to lift herself along with babies out of the poverty hole of financial, social, physical, emotional, mental, and spiritual oppression and bondage, that as a result the black male has brought upon her and her child/children through his lack of knowledge, willful ignorance, and selfishness.  The bondage that grips her through the birthing of a dependent human being and unfavorable conditions that unfaithful, non-committed, and selfish men leave her in is the so called baby mama external turmoil that black males experience as a result of the depths of their selfishness and non-committal attitude.

I know Tamela Mann said break every chain and I scream that every chain has yet to be broken off our race of people, and gender perception of women, especially black women still being mistreated, abused, and neglected like old used up property,etc. by these black males and other cultures and groups of people in general.

It's second nature in these days and times for black males to leave it to the government to play daddy and husband to the mothers and children of their inherited race.

When a man of any race for the fact of the matter; especially the black Hebrew race, leaves the black woman with child-pregnant and/or already given birth and delivered, that places more bondage on the entire race of people. (That's why non-Hebrew foreign women were off limits to the Hebrew males due to them being used to draw away the black Hebrew male away from His creator and his life purpose including spiritual obligations towards the black woman and black child.)  Instead of strengthening our heritage and culture, it makes its people weaker for generations to come and be.

However, men are usually only thinking about the short term, temporary, and spontaneous acts of pleasures that they can extract from multiple women simultaneously.  They don't consider all the pain they cause, produce, reproduce, create, cause in the process.  Instead of being a strong culture, great heritage, and financial wealthy power nation that we once were and spiritually still is, the only focus on most black men minds are on short term, momentary, and temporary pleasures that doesn't have any real sustainable substance that you can build a life, future, home (not a house), and generational wealth and great legacy, a.k.a. family and true family structure.

It has been implicated in the minds of black men that the more versatile their portfolio of women they conquer, control, and have sexual relations with and sometimes financially (yes, men prostitute too and use women for money and financial gain), the greater respect they will receive for being more manly and macho (a great deception imposed). In most cases it's true for the part receiving acknowledgment for their portfolio achievements with pats on the back and kudos given and praised from the same gender and the same type of men who encourages the disrespect towards life giving real women, mothers, and wives.  (I'm not talking about women who consciously flaunt themselves as less than to measure down to the dishonorable modern accepted status of being a hoe/thot/tramp and wears the titles proudly.  I'm not referring to these types of women.)  I am merely speaking about women who invest themselves to pour into another human being's cup to support, to encourage, and be there for the overall well-being of that counterpart and equal (the black Hebrew male, also known as the modern day Americanized European black male).

Life is too short men to be playing with real women or any human being life and taking us for granted.  And life is too short women for us to lower our standards and to settle for less than what we know we deserve, desire, and hope for.

They say a man can only do what you allow but I beg the differ and add "A man will do what you allow and more".

VENT-Can You Relate? Meditate!!!

Queen Versatile

with LOVE, JOY, and PEACE (Shalom)!!!

VENT: Letter, Not to Santa-"Merry Yahusha, the Messiah..."

"Merry Yahusha, the Messiah (Hebrew-Ha'Mashiach, 'The Anointed One')"

VENT-Can You Relate?
with Queen Versatile

A letter not to Santa,but to my Creator and His son my dear Savior...

Dear Yahuah(Heavenly Father) & Yahusha(Son/Earthly Savior),

You groomed me but then there's no groom.

You saved me but then there's no one to fit me with who's also saved.

You filled me with righteousness but then there's no righteous partner suitable I can walk throughout life with.

You love me and I love you back but there's no one who can express the same kind of love in return to me that you have expressed and showered me with generously.  

You formed me but there's no one in your image to live life with.

I'm content to know it's just you and I Heavenly Father Yahuah on this journey together.  And I will always be safe with you.  You will always provide for me and my children.  You will always protect us better than any human husband can or will.

I was searching for something or someone but I really didn't realize that I already obtained what I need and want, that's you and your perfect love expressed to me on a day-to-day life basis.

You deserve to have me all to yourself.

You give to me without any inhibitions besides, when it's not good for me, in my best interest, and/or it tries to come between you and I love relationship.  You remove all threats far, far away. 

I am content with your love, provisions, and protection.  And I know there's no one on earth that will possibly love me the way you do with a perfect agape type love.

I am truly thankful!

Thank you for providing four human vessels that you used to birth our five children.

You know I desired a family that's upright, just as well as you always have desired.  I'm grateful for you providing our unorthodox family with plenty of varied personalities.

With you less is more and the more I have you, the less I need a Hu-Man.

When you break my heart, you have the ability and will to fix it.  But when a Hu-Man breaks my heart, they just take off and run as far away as they can from the crime site.

While people take today (Christmas) and worship paganistic ideas and practice traditional rituals, I take this day, like any day, and reflect on my relationship with you.

Hallelujah to Yahuah, my Heavenly Father & to His Son, Yahusha Ha'Mashiach "The Anointed One"

Love your daughter & sister,

Queen Versatile

VENT-Can You Relate?

with Queen Versatile