Thursday, July 7, 2022

VENT: CRITIQUE, "Silent Music"

 "Silent Music"


VENT-Can You Relate?

with (Empress) QueenVersatile 



My own professional written critique  about my unique writing style.
                     By: (Empress) QueenVersatile 

I write silent music.  Technically,  it's silent lyrics because it doesn't have any written sheet notes.  However,  as you read my written lyrics, you read to the vibration of your own heart beat and to your own energetic frequency.  You create your own music as you read my written lyrics to your own rhythm that you only possess and emit.  No two people will read my lyrics alike or anything I write.  My written lyrics are written;  to entice, to listen to your own internal heart beat, instead, listening to external created beats made by others' heart beats.

The best way to learn thyself is to get in tune with thyself.  Tune in to your own heart beat daily and listen to what it has to say and offer.

VENT-Can You Relate? Meditate!
(Empress) QueenVersatile 
with LOVE, JOY, and PEACE (Shalom)!!!
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Friday, May 6, 2022

VENT: Song Lyrics, "From Better to Worst"-Writing Songs, Another Form to Venting


Written By:  Queen Versatile
Orig. Written On:  October 23, 2019, Wednesday


"From Better to Worst"


(Intro)
Instrumental 4-8 Bars


(Hook/Chorus)
From better to worst,
She gave up for the worst.
Affected the ones who meant the most;
 only wanted less
and rejected the best.

Tried to give her good solid advice.
But she never heeded my advice, so she disregarded it twice!
Tried to use me as a life line
while she wallowed in dust:  from dawn to dusk!


(Verse 1)
She was up for the best and now she's down for the worst
I took her under my wings reenacting the crucifixion
Her choices of men was not good
Mostly judgmental cause they looked hood

Now the consequences of all her bad decisions 
Has accumulated-piled up like the Tower of Babel
 She continues to complain, babbling, & false accusing
Too deceptive can't decipher her between humans, animals, & jungle snakes

You wouldn't guess she use to be civilized
Holding her own house down; helping everybody around
Now she's rabit;  been out in them woods for too long
Her body ran down; a lot of miles traveled;  down a slippery slope, there she go

3 beautiful little daughters;  Subjected to their mommy's foolish antics
They suffer in silence where nobody knows from a distance
Expected publicly to perform highly as a minority while being held at a lower standard
While getting their butts whipped & backs punched in for their mother's anger she holds within!


(Hook/Chorus)
From better to worst,
She gave up for the worst.
Affected the ones who meant the most;
 only wanted less
and rejected the best. 

Tried to give her good solid advice.
But she never heeded my advice so she disregarded it twice!
Tried to use me as a life line
while she wallowed in dust:  from dawn to dusk!


(Verse 2)
She'll pay a hundred a week for a daily weed habit fee
Versus paying for her daughter's $7 school field trip
That's a trip! 
You do the math

She tried to stay attached to me, Queen V
And use me as a life line
But I'm not a dummy
I can read in between the lines;  Far from a slow leak
Airtight, I never leak

So of course her little antics didn't work when she tried to play me.
Yeah, she did use her little daughters to manipulate my feelings
But what she didn't realize, there's nothing new under the sun & her games I've seen before
I seen that play; (echo-"Replay")

She never wanted to hear solid advice
But when she gets jammed in a pickle
And I tell her "Hell No! I don't have your back."
She wants to act bitter and put a knife to my neck; not literal, not Queen Versatile

But it's cool though 
Distance yourself Lil Sis
Cause at the end of the day it won't affect me anyways
Now you took your bad attitude out on me but it should've been them dudes who turned they backs on you while you were up & clueless.
FYI-Now you down & my name is Cat;  I don't have nothing to do with that!


(Hook/Chorus)
From better to worst,
She gave up for the worst.
Affected the ones who meant the most;
only wanted less
and rejected the best. 

Tried to give her good solid advice.
But she never heeded my advice so she disregarded it twice!
Tried to use me as a life line
while she wallowed in dust:  from dawn to dusk!


(Verse 3)
My heart go out to them 3 little daughters
That endures the day-to-day hell
And then made to promise their mother
They won't tell

If I didn't already have an A.M. on my record
I would send they mom straight back to hell 
And set them little babies free
So they can enjoy Heaven like little girls suppose to be
Consequently, releasing them from they mother's homemade jail cells

I have to remember-that's the human in me
I'm not the Messiah-that's the spirit in me
I can't save everybody
So I'mma humble myself and pray a little higher to the one above the I AM that I AM, thee Almighty Yah!

She's just reaping the consequences
The total sum of her life's bad decisions
But she can't handle the cup alone that she drinks from
So she pour it out on her kids, publicly and privately,
Especially in the home environment where she can operate freely
She went from better to worst!


(Outro)
Father please hear them little girls' cries
They're bright and beautiful don't let them succumb to demise
I pray that they will never travel to the dark side
No lie, they mother resembles Chucky's bride

She was carried off by her own freewill
And didn't give a care about my Heavenly Father's will
So ease the punishment...
And let her 3 little girls live;  forfeit the inevitable punishment


(Additional Outro)
You gave her what she really wanted
 The Pure Dust!
Ashes to Ashes And-Dust to Dust!
She's like the little pet snake she plays wit day-to-day!
Mothers come out the darkness and set a good example for your earthly sons and daughters!



VENT-Can You Relate?

Written By/Author:  Queen Versatile
Orig. Written On:  October 23, 2019, Wednesday